Amazing flash for an amazing game
It looks great and I can't wait for it. I really liked what you did with the screenshots, not a lot artists do those these days. You seem to have covered the whole game, but my question is; will you include EP1 and EP2? I'd say you might as well throw that in there.
There was only one bad thing about this trailer, the song (which ended halfway through the flash and started again a couple of seconds late). Also, It would have been really cool if you took screenshots of the characters and used them instead of drawing stick men.
All in all, I'm eager to see it. If you fixed the sound part, this would get a 9 from me and 10s from everyone else for sure. Good work. 8/10 5/5
Thank you for the constructive comment. I thought the part where the music pauses would look good, I wanted to include one of those jokes that require the music to pause to be funnier. What I did with the backgrounds was just tracing them, nothing artistic involved except choosing the right parameters for the traced image to come out not too bad and not too good.
I won't include Ep1 nor Ep2 because this movie is 25 minutes long without them.
As for sticks, this will be my style forever, the movie would lose its atmosphere if I made it with real characters :] especially Gordon.
Thanks for the vote!
Above avarage for a Madness Tribute
This flash was pretty good, I liked how you made the guy seem like he was on black-fire. I also liked how he killed the first guy by making him kind of vanish slowly into thin air.
Some bad things about this was the smoothness and speed of the animation. The whole thing seemed like it was in slow motion, maybe you could have fixed that if you spent an extra day or two in making this flash. Also, when the guy stabbed the other one with his sword, it didn't go all the way through his body (I know that this is hard to do since I have flash as well).
The music was good and it blended pretty well with the whole flash. It was kind of short, but at least it wasn't full of bugs. You're on your way to becoming a good flash artist, just spend a bit more time in making these before you submit them.
ha ha i knew someone would say about the speed! it was only 12 seconds at first so I reduced the FPS to 10. it runs fine on my computer though. i'll take your advice and make my next tribute at a higher FPS!!!l
FPS flash is finally here
This is revelution happening right here (as far as I can tell since I haven't seen any other FPS flashes). I can imagine games with the qualities of Fallout, Gears of war, Halo, MGS4 ect being made in flash.
Some of the bad stuff include the music (Higher paced action music would be cool). But other than that, this is pretty much the beggining of FPS on flash, and other small flaws could be forgiven.
5/5 10/10 (The first 10/10 I've given)
An incredible flash for begginers
Althrough it's basically a bunch of typed up pages, this is a very important flash because of the information and guidence it holds. It is kind of like a sign that says "Go this way for success".
It teached me about the groups on NG that I didn't know about before (such as the NGPD and EGB). So thank you for making the flash.
The only bad thing about this flash is that it is kind of short, meaning that you should put more tabs and sections about other things that people can do to help newgrounds. A "how to make a good flash" and a "how to make a good audio file" or something like that would make this great.
How did I not think of that? I should have included a flash/audio section. Oh well.
That was pretty neat
I was listening to this with a pair of headphones on, and it just felt pretty nice as the source of the sound kept shifting from ear to ear. It did get repetetive after a while though, but over all it was great.
Fits H2 perfectly
This song is as close as anyone will ever get to making Valve style half-life music. The only thing bad about this song was the breathing. It was cool at first, but having the exact same breath come right after made it feel... awkward.
And there's something about the machine voice. It almost feels as if an enormous machine is breathing, which is pretty cool. It adds to the ambient part of half-life.
Great job, I'll be waiting for your next one.
I hope my next one will be as good, so I won't disappoint anyone.^^
Thx for the cool review!
This is an amazing piece of work that would fit any cartoony flash. It has many different parts that all play at the same time, which adds a nice complexity to the tune.
I don't know if you've noticed, but it loops pretty good as well.
It would have been great if it were longer, but nothing's perfect.
Great Job 9/10 5/5
Thank you, sir.
Looks like something right out of a concept art book from a video game or movie.
One thing that could help your work would be the addition of glows. I find that adding soft glows over the lighted areas generally create a nice feeling and make the picture look less 2d.
Try adding very subtle glows around the areas where the light hits. You might want to see if it works out for you.
Keep up teh good work.
Thanks a lot man, I appreciate the advice!!
Thanks for the nice review also. :)
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